Oh i hear you
you're coming FINALLY
thought i smelled you .. felt your breeze kiss my cheek
and now i can SEE you
WOW..
you furiously tap upon their glistening leaves
just look at you pour out your wonder..
heavens delight to lavish your gift on us
oh you're almost HERE.
its almost my time
to feel your refreshing
cleansing for pores so parched
let me breathe you in...so close
oh NO
you lifted your veil
towards the west you went
you chose not to come
oh why why did you not come this way?
could you not hear my plea
did you not know i was here?
was it...someone
something
who needed you more ?
and yet i wait
watching now my hopes descend
as the sole of my feet burn
like the sun
next time..you will feel me
you won't be able to stay away
i suppose '
dark night will blanket me again
and tomorrow..
your dew will come!
Thank you for this. Your words are beautiful and the images are stunning. I am so happy your post on my blog brought me here. It has made my evening!
ReplyDeleteOm and Blessings,
Julie
What a beautiful post...I absolutely loved it. Thanks so much for sharing :) Cheers, Jenn
ReplyDeleteWow! This is so divine and beautiful! I love how you wrote about nature--the rain at that and your pictures are gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL blog!
Just loved it. Everything about it. *smiling into my chocolate cake and coffee now*
ReplyDeletewonderfully poetic
ReplyDeleteThe Kate Escape GBE2: control
Great pictures and poem.
ReplyDeleteJoyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/
This was just lovely! :O)
ReplyDeleteI adore the rain. It's not just that it clears the air and waters the ground. It's more to do with the tiny world contained and reflected within each drop. Just magical... like your words and pictures *hug*
ReplyDeleteoh mojo....i hear you : ) thank you everyone.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry and photos. This struck a chord with me, I love the rain and we are in a serious drought here. Please, oh please, oh please.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images and imagery!
ReplyDeletethanks all!! guess it would be a great time to replace the roof!! : ) ok HOLD BACK RAIN..hehe using reverse psychology doesn't work on mr rain either right? Or is that MURPHY i am thinking about
ReplyDeleteVery relaxing post. I wouldn't control the rain if I could ;)
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem and beautiful photos!
ReplyDeleteOh, I do so love this!! I'm a major fan of rain. There's no better way to sleep than to the sound of falling rain.
ReplyDeleteRE: surgery - no. Not yet a necessary consideration. Thanks for your comment!!
Oh HUG !!! I love your poetry !!! Big Hug !!! awesomesauce !
ReplyDeletethanks spark192000 ...hehe is that you sparkyB? when i wrote this i was sipping on some Chardonnay and NOT listening to boogie woogie!! hehe
ReplyDeleteLovely!! All of it!
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